One day in the holidays me and my sister Montana went shopping. My other two sisters were at home with mum. My brother and other sister were out at friend's. My sister Montana is older then me. Me and Montana were bored then Tony came because he needed to return something back so he thought of taking us to the shops in Waikanae. Mum said yes.
The first thing me, Tony and Montana did was went to Mitre 10 Mega. That's where Tony had to return the knee pads. Me and Montana had a look around. We got lights. Montana got white and I got purple. Tony got something too.
Next we went to the Warehouse Stationery shop. In the shop there were lots of things. It was cool. The next place was Spotlight. When we walked into the shop Tony found fake spiders. Tony put them in the trolley. Tony said he was going to scare Mum. Mum doesn't like spiders. I don't like spiders either. Montana got a glue gun and 100 glue sticks. I got a slime kit. Tony went to the checkout. after that, Me and Montana were hungry so we went through to McDonald. Then we went home .
Shopping with Tony and Montana was really, really fun!
Tuesday, 15 October 2019
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Hey Kasey! I liked how you explained most things but who are your 'other sisters' and your 'other brother', assuming people that are reading this don't know. I like McDonalds too!
ReplyDeleteI hope you had a good time
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ReplyDeleteI really like your writing, some people may not know who the people are so it would be better if you explained that a bit better, other than that it's good.
Hi Kasey! You have done a good job with your work! I really think you need to give us more Details about your story.. also i hope you had fun at McDonald's! :3
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